User talk:Sisterwhitness

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Questions about Summer Music for Wind Quintet
In response to your first question about the references, the reason the references are appearing twice is that the subsequent occurences of each reference are coded as name="Heyman"> or name="jstor">; if you will change this to  or this should resolve the problem. As to how much referencing you need, I think you have it just about right now. The Wikipedia guideline for verifiable references says that "[a]ll quotations and any material challenged or likely to be challenged should be attributed to a reliable, published source using an inline citation." Since you don't directly quote anyone and make no controversial claims, a basic amount of referencing is sufficient and I think you have accomplished that already. One more piece of advice I would offer is: don't indent your paragraphs. I know that goes against standard formatting style, but, in Wikipedia, it has the following result:

This is an example of unindented text. It will wrap around at the edge of the screen to fit any resolution display.

This is an example of indented text. It it meant for special circumstances where normal wiki formatting is impossible (e.g. examples of Java or C++ code). This requires manual insertion of breaks or it will continue off the right side of the screen.

An example of the intended use of this format can be seen at the article of JavaScript. For normal text, just don't indent and it will display properly.

I hope this is helpful information, and let me say that I am surprised to hear you say that you know little of your subject. It doesn't show in your editing which means you have really done your research. Wikipedia needs more editors with such dedication. Cheers! OlenWhitaker  • talk to me or don't • ♣ ♥ ♠ ♦ 03:27, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

RE:Referencing help
Sorry I didn't get back to you until now, I'm a full time college student and very actively involved on my campus. I think these sources might be able to answer your questions: Check out Help:Contents, GSUSA, and Final Fantasy VIII. The first is a help page on editing, and the last 2 are very well sourced and written articles. Girl Scouts of the USA was heavily edited and written by myself and is a featured article. Final Fantasy VIII is also a featured article, and was edited not by myself, but mainly by a user that is extremely knowledgeable on many aspects of article writing and language usage so I feel it is an excellent example as well if not better than GSUSA. I hope this helps! Darth Griz98  02:15, 3 April 2008 (UTC)