User talk:Sivakorn.svb1003

ICCH224
Please complete online student training at https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students You must login and complete the three basic modules. After completion of these module, we will be able to see that you have edited three pages: Please complete this assignment by the end of today. Special:Contributions/Sivakorn.svb1003 at this time shows that you have not finished: You need to be logged in, so that your contributions are recorded under your account. --Taweetham (talk) 07:29, 29 September 2017 (UTC)
 * sandbox
 * be bold
 * talk page tutorial

This is a final reminder. Please complete your training by the end of today. --Taweetham (talk) 02:46, 30 September 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for creating your account on Wikipedia. Unfortunately, we have to move on to the next step with only those who complete their training on time. You are still welcome to edit Wikipedia any time. --Taweetham (talk) 03:50, 1 October 2017 (UTC)

Special:Contributions/Sivakorn.svb1003 at this time shows that you have finished the online student training at https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students. Thank you for completing the student training, please propose a few topics that you wish to write on Wikipedia. You should read all related articles on Wikipedia and draft your new article(s) or revision to existing article(s) in your sandbox. We are looking forward to seeing in your sandbox by Friday 6th October. --Taweetham (talk) 10:01, 7 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Your proposed topic(s)
 * Brief outline of your contributions to the article
 * References for the article and sources of media files (photo/VDO/drawing) to be used in the article.

Please read WP:NOT and recommendation on course page on how to select the article. We need the topic by the end of today. --Taweetham (talk) 10:03, 7 October 2017 (UTC)

Moisturizer
Please start editing the proposed article now. You should also tell us a plan on how to produce media files for the article. --Taweetham (talk) 06:53, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

According to the timeline on course page, you are expected to contribute at least 500 bytes by the 13th October. It does not need to be perfect at this time if it is on your sandbox for new article. It has to be somewhat presentable if you are editing the existing article directly. Further optional training on the course page will help you. Feel free to ask if you have any questions. --Taweetham (talk) 09:59, 9 October 2017 (UTC)

Please merge your draft in to the existing article. Be careful with WP:NOT and WP:COPYVIO. We expect to see your work in the article namespace by Friday the 20th of October. --Taweetham (talk) 02:46, 14 October 2017 (UTC)

A reviewer has been assigned to you. Please check course page for more information. The reviewer will be your mentor for this assignment from this week onward. --Taweetham (talk) 01:39, 15 October 2017 (UTC)

Thank your for your contribution to the article. There are a number of possible improvements: There is a chance that your content will be reverted if not in encyclopedic tone/not formatted properly. Please try to address this as soon as possible. --Taweetham (talk) 03:35, 21 October 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Please make sure that you writing is encyclopedic - the listing you have added does not appear to be encyclopedic.
 * 2) Please format your article properly.  You should not have the reference on the section heading "Role of moisturizer[2]"
 * 3) Before adding content to Wikipedia, you should read the existing article in whole and see how the new information can be integrated into the existing article.  You should not rely on one source to change the structure of the article.  It is possible that the information you want to add can be integrated into existing sections "by indication" or "mechanisms of action".
 * 4) Please plan how would you create media files for your article.
 * 5) Please read article discussion page and try to address issues discussed there.
 * 6) Please read general information on the course page to make sure that you satisfy all aspects of our grading criteria.

Please action on #1 Please make sure that you writing is encyclopedic - the listing you have added does not appear to be encyclopedic. --Taweetham (talk) 08:27, 6 November 2017 (UTC)