User talk:Siviriano19

Revision
As you requested, I have revised your translation at User:Siviriano19/sandbox. My corrections can be seen here. The two issues that stand out are word order and the specific vocabulary of medieval military architecture (lienzo, for example, is a curtain wall in English, rather than a canvas, and "patio de armas" might be a parade ground at a barracks or an army camp, but is a bailey in a castle). Good use of tenses (avoiding the common pitfalls). MHAN2016 (talk) 09:01, 14 May 2019 (UTC)