User talk:Sjmkahn

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jaroslav Muzika (January 3)
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Theroadislong (talk) 20:32, 3 January 2023 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Jaroslav Muzika has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Jaroslav Muzika. Thanks! Eagleash (talk) 07:31, 23 April 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jaroslav Muzika (April 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Johannes Maximilian was:

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Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 07:42, 23 April 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jaroslav Muzika (August 26)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:33, 26 August 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jaroslav Muzika (September 28)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Cabrils was:

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Cabrils (talk) 02:56, 28 September 2023 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Jaroslav Muzika has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Jaroslav Muzika. Thanks! Cabrils (talk) 00:51, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jaroslav Muzika (October 21)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Johannes Maximilian was:

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Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 00:02, 21 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi: reading like an essay is a good thing, not a bad thing. And the references are formatted correctly, in accordance with academic style. Unfortunately, the wikisite you point me to does not give specific instructions on how to format references. So, if there is a correction you would like me to make, you will have to give some specific instructions. Sjmkahn (talk) 18:17, 4 November 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jaroslav Muzika (November 4)
 Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Draft:Jaroslav_Muzika Articles for creation help desk] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Asparagusus was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: I'm going to be WP:BOLD and reject this. There has been no change since the last submission. None of the citations have been formatted correctly, and there are no inline citations. Nobody has fixed this in a year so I doubt anyone will. Five declines is more than enough time to fix an article, but there are still massive problems. I believe that the only way to fix this is to WP:TNT it. Also, a lot of the sources don't have WP:SIGCOV and the prose is still somewhat like an essay.

—asparagusus  (interaction)  sprouts!  20:18, 4 November 2023 (UTC)

Wikipedia is an encyclopedia and has content guidelines
Hello Sjmkahn. Based on your reply here 1, you appear to not understand Wikipedia's goals. However, you have not been welcomed properly, so that's what this is for. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia. It is not a place to publish your essays. The most important content policy is that editors have to write in a neutral tone. Editors also need to provide reliable sources to establish notability of their subjects. You also seem to not know how to correctly format Wikipedia sources. Please read WP:HOWTOCITE, which you have been directed to before. Wikipedia doesn't have the same citation formatting as "academic sources". You need to put inline links to citations in your articles so readers can tell what citations support which content. Many editors have given you instructions on how to improve the article, but there has not been significant change since you first submitted it. Have a good day/night! —asparagusus  (interaction)  sprouts!  20:34, 4 November 2023 (UTC)


 * sorry, but these comments are, like most of the comments I've received, garbage. You claim that the article has not undergone significant revisions. That is false. You claim that the article is not written in a neutral tone. That is false. You've rejected the article now on the grounds that the subject isn't sufficiently notable, whereas previous editors already had accepted it as sufficiently notable--and they were right to do so: a WWII vet decorated by not one but two heads of state (the Queen of England and the President of Czechoslovakia) is, indeed, sufficiently notable. Stop being obstructionist; provide some halfway decent feedback that actually tells me what you want me to fix, in concrete terms, not some vague obstructionist nonsense about writing essays (a previous comment told me that the article was written like a CV; I changed that--and now I'm told it reads like an essay. Apparently you don't know what an essay is if you think that Wikipedia doesn't include essays on significant subjects as entries. Every encyclopedia does so). 191.81.167.26 (talk) 22:02, 4 November 2023 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Jaroslav Muzika
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 21:05, 5 April 2024 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Jaroslav Muzika


Hello, Sjmkahn. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Jaroslav Muzika".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 21:13, 4 May 2024 (UTC)