User talk:Sjorjs

Your submission at Articles for creation: Florian Breuer (Canoer) (September 20)
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 Qcne  (talk)  16:12, 20 September 2023 (UTC)


 * I translated it from the german version mainly. Could you look at that one as well and tell me if both are correct. Also is the only problem the missing of references? Sjorjs (talk) 17:00, 20 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi I adjusted the page could you have a second look to it? Sjorjs (talk) 10:24, 27 September 2023 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Florian Breuer (Canoer) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Florian Breuer (Canoer). Thanks! -- NotC hariza rd 🗨 16:14, 20 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi I saw the comment and adapted the page. Could you give a second look to it? Sjorjs (talk) 10:23, 27 September 2023 (UTC)