User talk:Sjw229

Hi, and welcome to Wikipedia. It looks as if you've well and truly got to grips with editing, but can I respectfully suggest that you might re-consider some of your references and "tone", or style. The tone is overly "academic essay". Reference should be accessible online if possible, and things like the three references to "Marsden, M., & Henare, T. A. (1992). Kaitiakitanga: A definitive introduction to the holistic world view of the Maori: - an unpublished manuscript! How is that helpful?

One of the "fun" aspects of Wikipedia is having your carefully crafted prose pruned - try to understand and persevere, as clearly you have a lot of relevant knowledge. Snori (talk) 02:55, 28 May 2012 (UTC)