User talk:Skhawaja17/sandbox

I think you should add headings such as Introduction, Reason for US' incarceration approach, compare it to other countries prison systems. interesting topic but sounds biased- quote or paraphrase other sites and journals- then incorporate it into your article. Your tone and perspective should be neutral and objective, you are stating facts or views that other writers/experts had. Then you summarize it into your article. I think because you are creating this article from scratch- you don't have headings or subheadings yet, so before submitting make sure to add that because it will give the reader an understanding or a picture before going into the paragraphs. Also, you should add some citations and there is some grammar you could smooth out, but overall it is a fascinating topic!