User talk:Skhlaw/sandbox

Comment from Candy
Hi Lawrence,

Here are some comments on your work, hope it may help,

1. Good to provide the geographical location for the Dharwar Craton.

2. Good to present the formation and evolution of the Dharwar Craton.

3. Better provide blue links and elaboration on the rock types in the ‘Lithologies’ part.

4. Better to add a table to present the lithology of certain area, this have better organisation on the points.

5. Can give more explanation on what is accretions events in ‘Archean crust accretions’ part.

Keep it up with your work :) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Candyyeung168 (talk • contribs) 05:38, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

Comment from Graeme
Hi Skhlaw.

Thanks for referencing every single paragraph. I have a couple of small suggestions. For Ga and Ma, provide a link to Gigaannum and Megaannum as I expect the average reader here will not know what it means. Perhaps at the first use add a parenthesised explanation eg (billion years ago). Also WDC and EDC are something for a paper in a journal, but as they are extremely rare abbreviations, that I expect that not even your fellow students will know, please always spell them out in full. For Wikipedia we are writing for people with a high school education, which we could assume was year 12. You may mention the abbreviations once when you first introduce, as that will help searchers find them too.

And I will also ask you, what is the most catchy or exciting thing to say about the Dharwar Craton? Graeme Bartlett (talk) 05:39, 13 October 2021 (UTC)

Comment from Andy
Introduction You can add links on geology terms such as hotspot and sanukitoid. Geological background In the 2nd paragraph, 'The WDC is older with a cratonisation age around 3.0 Ga while the younger EDC is younger with the cratonisation age around 2.5 Ga'... You repeated the meaning? Formation and evolution You can add links on ridge push, and talk about what is dome-keel structures — Preceding unsigned comment added by LklAndy (talk • contribs) 06:04, 13 October 2021 (UTC)

Comment from Christy
This introduction is clear because you point out the geological background of the three crustal blocks. I think you can also point out the exact location of the crustal blocks on your map.

The evolutionary diagrams are easy to understand and clear because there are many simple annotations to explain the processes! However, in the evolutionary diagams of <2740 and 2740-2700, the color of the eastern block changed from blue to green. I think you can change the color to green because both the oceanic plateau and the micro continent represent the eastern block of the craton. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Christycheungkayan (talk • contribs) 17:45, 16 October 2021 (UTC)