User talk:Skire913

September 2016
Hello and welcome to Wikipedia. I saw your post at the help desk and subsequently found your draft. I have amended the headings in accordance with Wiki's Manual of Style. You will need to create a title for the article (which is repeated as the 'boldname' in the first line) when you come to move it to mainspace. In the meantime, any person you wish (and possibly some you don't) can edit the page merely by following the link to it but they must not edit using your account. If you have not already seen it, please have a look at WP:MEDRS. Thank you. Eagleash (talk) 18:04, 30 September 2016 (UTC)

Further, please do not underline level 3 (===) or lower headings as this is not per MoS. Thank you. Eagleash (talk) 18:35, 30 September 2016 (UTC)

Unsourced additions
Please do not add or change content, as you did at Impella, without citing a reliable source. Please review the guidelines at Citing sources and take this opportunity to add references to the article. Thank you. --David Biddulph (talk) 17:05, 20 October 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Acute Cardiac Unloading (December 19)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Acute Cardiac Unloading and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Robert McClenon (talk) 17:14, 19 December 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Acute Cardiac Unloading (December 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Acute Cardiac Unloading and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the or on the.
 * You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

SwisterTwister  talk  21:21, 23 December 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Acute Cardiac Unloading (February 7)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Winged Blades of Godric was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Acute Cardiac Unloading and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the or on the.
 * You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Winged Blades Godric 07:24, 7 February 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Acute cardiac unloading has been accepted
 Acute cardiac unloading, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! — Yashtalk stalk 04:07, 17 March 2017 (UTC)
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WP:PAID
You are required to disclose your connection to the topic you write about. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 21:45, 18 April 2017 (UTC)

I would gladly do so if I was being paid to write this article. Doc James
 * Are you paid in any way by the company in question? Best Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 20:51, 24 April 2017 (UTC)