User talk:Sklupp1/sandbox

B.J.Carmichael Feedback
The article is organized and supported by appropriate references. To improve your contribution, be sure that the writing is fact-based and supported with citations, watch for spelling, grammatical and word choice errors, and provide links to other Wikipedia pages. The focus of the contribution should be the Mendenhall glacier, with other glaciers supporting ideas. For topic sentences, put the main subject first. For example, "Another major factor causing recession of the Mendenhall glacier is global climate change." switch so Global climate change is first. Overall, the contribution is good and you should continue to revise.B.J.Carmichael (talk) 23:01, 5 November 2013 (UTC)