User talk:Skon123/sandbox

The article does a good job staying focused on the facts on the NCG 2623 galaxy. The facts are often laid out in a very direct and unbiased tone, which adds a sense of veracity and scientific validity to the article.

I would suggest making a more of an attempt to link the facts in a more narrative way. This will make the article read less choppy and be more engaging. I think that this can still be done while retained the heavy reliance on facts and figures.

I think that the article would be well served with references to other galaxies. For instance, how do the physical characteristics compare to others? What makes it unique? Adding some of this greater context will paint a more detailed picture beyond one dimensional facts and figures, and will be valuable for the common person who wants to know about the bigger picture.

Also, looking at the structure of other galaxies wiki articles might help you format yours in a professional way and that is consistent with other related pages.

I will go back to my article and try to also add more facts and improve the linking of said facts as I suggested above. Hoffmanp1 (talk) 14:39, 22 October 2019 (UTC)