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Political Obligation
Political Obligation refers to the responsibility a person has to engage in civics with their country at either the local level, or the national level. Many philosophers and political scientists have argued what constitutes political obligation for a person. [ATTRIBUTE THE DEFINITION TO A SOURCE, OFFER SOME COMPETEING DEFINITIONS]

History
The idea of political obligation was first founded by Thomas Hill Green around the late 1800's. For Green, he discussed this idea AS[GREEN DISCUSSED THE IDEA OF] "obedience to the law."[1] However, Green's explanation for what is Political Obligation [NO CAPITALIZATION] only scratches the surface [UNNECESSARY COLLOQUIALISM], and a more detailed look at the term can be traced to the thoughts of Socrates and Plato.[EXPAND ON THIS] Dudley Knowles also looks at this through his book, and finds a more detailed look at[, IN HIS BOOK xxx, LOOKS AT] the relationship the person and the state have towards each other.[2]

'NOTES: Needs a ton of expansion. Look into more Socrates, Plato, Max Weber, and Cicero. Also, this topic seems very similar to this article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Civic_engagement' Kcline14 (talk) 20:57, 8 October 2018 (UTC)

This is a start more than a draft. It's difficult to offer much feedback. It would be nice to know how scholars have used the concept, which scholars have used the concept, why it matters. Cassell04 (talk) 01:07, 16 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
Your article looks good so far, but I would like to know who certain persons are, such as "Dudley Knowels", whom you cite as an author pertaining to the subject. I think that making the main heading "History" and each author into a subsection under it might allow for an easier navigation of the page. I am certain that you will expand on this, but showing how this has affected policy in the past might be a good addition. Wesley J 17 (talk) 16:08, 20 October 2018 (UTC)

This is a good start to your article and when finished will be a really interesting article to read. Make sure that you're citing your sources and have more substantial text to back up whatever claims you may make for your final post. Maybe try and compare direct quotes from Socrates and Aristotle to more modern philosophers and political thinkers to try and derive how the opinions and stances of politics have changed over so much time. Blue2gold (talk) 21:46, 20 October 2018 (UTC)