User talk:Skulinsk/sandbox

Overall your article has a neutral tone, is easy to read, and grammatically correct. It is a brief article. I assume you haven't finished expanding on each heading as you have indicated in your plan. It might be helpful if you include how the altered function can cause the disorders listed. The section on interactions lists one interaction. Perhaps you could describe the interaction and include its significance. A more comprehensive first paragraph would also be helpful, especially if it briefly touches on the information that will be presented in the subsequent sections. Happy writing and good luck! Tbechar (talk) 18:15, 29 November 2017 (UTC)