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Ive added three sentences in Vulnerable/Virtuous women Skyyron (talk) 16:14, 4 November 2019 (UTC)sky

Women furthermore possess unique skills and knowledge, which are important in building equal and sustainable responses to climate change. The UNFPA report State of World Population 2009- Facing a changing world: women, population and climate, identifies women as important actors in the mobilization against climate change. The report quotes Wangari Maathai that “Women hold the key to Climate’s Future”; “when we talk about reducing emissions from deforestation and degradation, we need to focus on women […]” Specifically, Carolyn Sachs discusses the struggles women face on a global scale against environmental factors, such as gender arrangements in agricultural development. Often times women become oppressed by their corporate counterparts as a more focused point of reference in women's vulnerability. Women labor is exploited as a way to keep them from fighting back in turn, during the mid year season change they face vast struggles of extreme climate change and availability to natural resources.[1] Tyoudon11 (talk) 13:43, 12 November 2019 (UTC)

MW RESPONSES AND EDITS TO TEXT: GOOD SENTENCE:: Women furthermore possess unique skills and knowledge, which are important in building equal and sustainable responses to climate change.

CITE THE REPORT: The UNFPA report State of World Population 2009- Facing a changing world: women, population and climate, identifies women as important actors in the mobilization against climate change.

ADD LINK TO WANGARI MAATHAI´s PAGE ON WIKIPEDIA AND FIX QUOTE, WHICH DOESN'T EXPLAIN WHY WE NEED TO FOCUS ON WOMEN: The report quotes Wangari Maathai that “Women hold the key to the Climate’s Future”; “when we talk about reducing emissions from deforestation and degradation, we need to focus on women […]”

SMALL EDITS IN CAPS (REMOVE CAPS WHEN YOU PUBLISH): Specifically, Carolyn Sachs discusses the struggles women face on a global scale DUE TO environmental AND SOCIAL FACTORS, ESPECIALLY gender arrangements in agricultural development.

CUT SENTENCE. DOESN't MAKE SENSE: Women OFTEN ARE oppressed by their corporate counterparts as a more focused point of reference in women's vulnerability.

SMALL EDITS: Women's labor IN WHERE? is exploited as a way to keep them from fighting back in turn, during the mid year season change they face vast struggles of extreme climate change and availability OF natural resources.[1] Mwernergeo (talk) 02:06, 26 November 2019 (UTC)