User talk:Sleepwhenyouredead/Strange Beasts of China/ConnorPrim Peer Review

I just wanted to say that I really appreciate the length and organization of your feedback!

Summary: I get so focused on parallel sentence structure sometimes that I don't notice the redundancy, I think the elimination of "her" in every repetition really helped make the statement flow better! I think it is all that leftover from the English ACT prep XD

Beasts: The book is organized so that each chapter presents a new beast. Sorrowful beasts are the first chapter, so there is a lot more information about them that can be cited, just because it is included in many book reviews. Thanks for the reminder about capitalization! I meant to check on that.

Authorship and Style: Yeah, I guess that I was most concerned with getting the "meat" of the book out of the way first. I will definitely think on this and discuss it with my group. Sleepwhenyouredead (talk) 04:17, 12 April 2022 (UTC)Cadee H