User talk:Slesl1/sandbox

Peer Review
1. You ned to add citations with your ideas. steps: under templates click cite ... whatever you're citing and fill out the information. It will then go to wherever your mouse is and then when you publish your sandbox then it will add the [1] to your information. You can then copy this stuff so when you go to edit a page you can just paste it in.

2. I think you should definitely add what your possible topics are that you said. all those are good and would really benefit your article. I think you need to actually write out word for word what you're going to say in the article. If you do that I can edit it and make sure it is clear and good for wikipedia.

3. You are following the assignment correctly and the format. Just add more information for what you're putting in your article.

4. You are going to change the article for the better with the sufficient information that you're adding. Ocris1 (talk) 18:25, 30 April 2018 (UTC)

1.) Make sure to cite your ideas properly.

2.) Elaborate on what ideas you want to add, make it very clear what you think should be added to the article.

3.) Make sure the importance of your possible topic ideas are clear, your added ideas need to be relevant to the article.

4.) You are very neutral with the article which is very good. Jasminbarrows11 (talk) 18:27, 30 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review Response
Thank you for your feedback, with this I plan to touch up on what you picked out. In my "Final Edits" section I have added my final additions and have also included information from the article along with it. I did this to help visualize how my additions will flow along with the article while adding sufficient advice. I also managed to correctly add the source citations to show where I got my information from. Slesl1 (talk) 15:08, 1 May 2018 (UTC)