User talk:Slhight/Auriculella tenella

Peer Review

 * 1) * Some changes I would suggest. 1.) For the section titled Description either just leave it titled as Description or change it to just Morphology & Anatomy. 2.) The only section that is a little bit confusing is the one titled Article Body. Is that part of the Lead Section? The Article Body can form part of the Lead Section. You can maybe add what Hawaiian Island your species is found in. 3.) The last sentences in Description and Distribution do not have citations. If the sentence is cited from the resource on the citation of the sentence beforehand I would put the citation at the end of the second sentence.
 * 2) * Is the article ready for prime-time and the world to see on Wikipedia? If not, how could the author improve the article to be ready? The article is good but maybe some slight adjustments can be made. Grammatical structure in some of the sentences can be improved. Maybe add a sentence of which Hawaiian island your species is found.
 * 3) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article? Add more information to the Lead Section. Change some of the grammatical structure in your Description section. Example: Shell Description- Seven inflated whorls and Slender and high spiral should be added to another sentence or the information should be in a sentence that makes sense.

Rcinfowikirc (talk) 05:58, 23 October 2023 (UTC)