User talk:Slm88/sandbox

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I'm an online ambassador for your WMST 250: Women, Art, and Culture (2014 Q3) class and have just stopped by to provide a quick review and add what I hope will be helpful comments.

You've done a nice job on the article! It has background and career information and the content is cited
 * The sources used in the article don't come from what are considered reliable sources. It's better to get information from books, newspapers, journals, and other sources that have an editorial control and are not biased.
 * I put the bare urls into citation templates for you - and completed one as an example. The title, publisher / site owner, and the access date should be provided at a minimum.
 * Titles of works - and names of newspapers, journals, magazines, and books should be in italics.
 * Is Pacific Griver = Pacific Grove?

You may want to consider:
 * Adding a list of some of her illustrations?
 * Perhaps the long sentence in awards could be broken into multiple sentences - or put into a list?

I'll be watching this page and your sandbox page for any updates. You can also "ping" me (just type "" as you see it) to your message on this page or leave a message on my talk page. Happy editing!-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 16:18, 2 November 2014 (UTC)

Image
I see that you uploaded an image, that was later deleted. Generally, this is because of lack of justification. Here is an example of a work of art that was justified as a non-free image, if you would like to try to add an image again.-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 16:18, 2 November 2014 (UTC)