User talk:Sloth-Jaw/sandbox

Hey, looks good, and I really like what you decided to write it on! The formatting is a little messed up, and you need more information and sources. I also noticed that the writing seemed a little informal for an encyclopedia, so maybe try to sound a little more professional. Hope this helps!

The format is kind of strange, However after looking at the edit box I'm not quite sure how to fix. Idonthaveacomputer (talk) 18:50, 5 April 2012 (UTC)

there definitely needs to be more info, and once yo fix the wraparound problem it will be better. also, the links yo have are just web site titles, maybe have them be words or phrases that people can click on. Acvanauken (talk) 18:52, 5 April 2012 (UTC)

The subject looks interesting you just need more words and work on the formatting, overall really good! Kmbyers (talk) 18:57, 5 April 2012 (UTC)Kmbyers