User talk:Sloths2/sandbox

Great start! I particularly appreciated the section describing the legal authority, which had a clear encyclopedic tone and addressed a complicated issue. This appears to be a very complicated and broad issue—if you find you’re addressing too many subtopics or issues, feel free to move some things into a further reading section. Slsnw12 (talk) 19:47, 25 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Sloths2 (talk) 20:03, 25 February 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review
Wow! Your article is a huge improvement on the current page for General Data Protection Regulation. A couple of suggestions or questions from someone who knows absolutely nothing about this: in the first sentence there are a couple of terms I am unclear on, but perhaps someone who is navigating to your page will already know what they are: "data protection authority"- i realize the first paragraph describes what it is but i am still slightly unclear... is there a structure that all member countries must follow or it is up to each individual country to do this? i realize people are probably navigating to this page from the GDPR page where they will have learned this, but the wikipedia entry for GDPR also does not define what it is (at least based on my skimming. "the privacy law" - i was wondering whether this is referring to the GDPR specifically or any additional laws the european countries may legislate? like i said, great job, huge improvement over the current page. keep up the great work! - Kguth (talk) 08:43, 7 March 2019 (UTC)@kguth