User talk:Slothyfr

Edits to Moab 240
Hi, I recently undid the changes you made to this article for a few reasons. Let me know if you want help making changes. Steven Walling &bull; talk  21:29, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) They were formatting incorrectly, with missing paragraph breaks and improperly formatted citations
 * 2) They weren't written in a neutral, encyclopedic tone
 * 3) Some of them were duplicative. You added references already included in the citations within the article for instance.