User talk:Slushkan3an/sandbox

The article contains numerous grammatical, spelling and formatting errors. It consistently misuses tenses and syntax in sentences and violates the fundamental five C’s that Wikipedia attempts to apply to all articles: clarity, correctness, concision, comprehensibility and consistency.

Example: “Ema Hinata is the daughter of the famous adventurer Rintarō Hinata. One day, Ema finds out that her dad is going to remarry with a successful apparel maker named Miwa Asahina. Rather than bothering them, she decides to move in to the Sunrise Residence complex that is owned by Miwa. From there, she discovers that she has 13 step-brothers.” (Wikipedia 2014). Should be replaced by:

“Ema Hinata, daughter of famous adventurer Rintaro Hinata discovers that her father intends to remarry Miwa Asahina, a successful apparel maker. In response, Ema chooses to reside in the Sunrise Residence complex, an establishment owned by Miwa. To her surprise, Ema discovers that she has 13 step-brothers.”

The following has been done:

Correction of grammatical and sentence structure errors on the first section including introduction and character list.

Slushkan3an (talk) 20:30, 9 March 2014 (UTC)