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Liam Then write message here. SmallTowne12 (talk) 15:32, 26 January 2016 (UTC) Feedback: After the number [3] grammar error: to be After number [4] grammar error: she drank In the last sentence: ** are the men themselves committing the crime. Organized The article flows very well but adding more examples of what falls under the schedule might help readers understand the topic better. -	all the information is on topic and there is not any random info added. -	Maybe include some reasons and ways how this effects women (mental health) - the links at the top of the article were about Mardi Gras and I didnt read anything about mardi gras so may want to check that out. lol Itsahme (talk) 14:55, 17 March 2016 (UTC)itsahme