User talk:Smalls2023/Developmental psychology

Hi Smalls2023! I really enjoy developmental psychology so I'm glad you chose this article! While I was reading your article, I looked at your reference and noticed that it was from 1996. While I agree and support what you have written, I would suggest finding a more recent article to back your claims. After reading the article and what your proposed changes are, I am confused by what you mean by 'research was made'. I would suggest changing this to 'researchers have found' or 'research has been done'. I would also expand on the specific models needed by looking up additional articles that describe these models and include that information. Overall, great work! Haleymck (talk) 00:30, 19 June 2022 (UTC)