User talk:SmartScience

Hyperloop Transportation Technologies
Hello SS, I read your edits to HTT and Hyperloop. My personal assessment is that you are completely correct. For all the best reasons, you question the hyperbolic assertions that hyperloop is new and successful. In the world of Wikipedia, that qualifies as WP:Synthesis. You'll need to find a press report that supports your sensible analysis. The problem is that until the public is asked to contribute money, most of what you'll read is the breathless reporting of sycophants. It's no fun to write a disparaging article about a speculative technology. I took a different tack, which was not reversed. I listed the promises HTT has made along with the projected dates. HTT, in particular, is a scam whose longevity astounds me. They make an animation or plywood mockup and call it success. Then they traipse around the world signing letters of intent that have no teeth. For the two principals and their PR agent, it's a career.

The alternate view of this industry is that it has a marketing approach that simply promises revolution rather than evolutionary development. All of their design elements are inevitable, just not simultaneously. Sure, subways will get better, but telling people that speeds will increase three percent per year is not near as exciting as a leap to trans-sonic speeds. It's simply a marketing tactic, not an engineering strategy. The public buys this science fiction. It is as much gaslighting as climate change denial. Rhadow (talk) 13:17, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

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Properly describing marriage, divorce, remarriage, 2nd divorce, and new marriage.
Hello! In the info box provided for a biography, how would one designate the occurrence of two marriages of the same persons with a divorce in between and subsequent marriage to a new wife for the subject of the Wiki article? Thank you! Meanwhile, I will search wiki for possible examples such as Richard Burton/ Elizabeth Taylor and others...

See also sections
See also sections are only for links to existing Wikipedia articles, you should not be listing names in that section that are not article links. - MrOllie (talk) 00:28, 22 July 2020 (UTC)

Oko Drammeh moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, Oko Drammeh, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of " " before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. ~Styyx Talk ? 00:44, 11 August 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox/Oko Drammeh (September 5)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 03:10, 5 September 2022 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Oko Drammeh has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Oko Drammeh. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 03:11, 5 September 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you, sir! I should delete the original draft, and submit this new one. The original was a mistake. A relatives todler playing with the computer 'submitted' the previous. It was a beginning with no references, nor had it been coded for format. This new one is complete. I appreciate your efforts. SmartScience (talk) 05:54, 5 September 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Oko Drammeh (November 3)
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Star  Mississippi  21:19, 3 November 2022 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Oko Drammeh
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 08:45, 2 May 2023 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Oko Drammeh


Hello, SmartScience. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Oko Drammeh".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 21:35, 3 May 2023 (UTC)