User talk:Smcc24/Dietary management of Parkinson's disease

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The reordering made the information much more clear. Good job on recognizing misinformation and non-Wikipedia approved use of source information. The last section discussing dairy products as having a negative effect may benefit from a more general transition sentence introducing the idea there are diet patterns that are negative, and then present information about diary products (which could also use a few more neuro details). Magattab (talk) 01:44, 12 April 2024 (UTC)