User talk:Smguzman/Diffuse infantile fibromatosis/Hsahota Peer Review

Peer Review

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Smguzman, Helendhuynh, Matthew.Lee4, and Alukyo1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diffuse_infantile_fibromatosis?action=edit
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Diffuse infantile fibromatosis

Evaluate the drafted changes
1) Do the group’s edits substantially improve the article as described in the Wikipedia peer review “Guiding framework”? The group did a great job in differentiating between the two types of infantile fibromatosis tumors in the classification section and described them in a way that an average person would understand without using heavy medical terminology. The group added sections like "Epidemiology", "History", and "Research direction" which I think added to the quality of the article and bring a different perspective to the condition other than a clinical aspect.

2) Has the group achieved its overall goals for improvement?

The textual content of the article has heavily improved. However, I think images can be added to help visualize the content - maybe a picture or scan of the types of tumors. Additionally, hyperlinking medical terminology to the affiliated Wikipedia article would be helpful.

3b) Are the claims included verifiable with cited secondary sources that are freely available?

The claims made throughout the article are cited with verifiable cited secondary student and are freely available. I went through the hyperlinks provided in the resources sections to make sure that the sources are readily available. Hsahota (talk) 17:16, 1 August 2022 (UTC)