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Smilesxo Peer Review By Hunni22

I really like your plan of editing the article. You are adding many valuable information. I would say under the Replacement Migration, you should section out your paragraph, it seems very long. Maybe adding a small section under your article and adding these facts under it would defiantly help. Also, I think you can expand more knowledge under the last sentence of the “concept of replacement level” and identify the net migration you were referring to. Lastly, under the criticism section if you can find more reasons of why the replacement level is negatively impacting the environment would also answer many questions to the audience when they are reading the article. Nice job, no grammar or spelling error. Hunni22 (talk) 18:58, 1 April 2018 (UTC)Hunni22

Article Evaluation:

I think your edits added useful information to the article overall. The article is unbiased and presents what replacement migration truly is. The article explained what the topic is on the basics but it did not go into depth very far. Each fact and statement is cited with sources that are very researched and some are peer-reviewed. I think that the criticism section of the article could be improved by expanding how the replacement migration could impact the environment negatively and how it could be an analytical and hypothetical tool. Overall, this is a nice article with clear information and no spelling and grammar errors. ElizabethFritz (talk) 22:35, 1 April 2018 (UTC)

I really like the edits you made to the article. It goes in depth about the issues that may occur when people migrate. It really helps the reader understand what may happen when there is an influx of migration. ElizabethFritz (talk) 02:01, 11 April 2018 (UTC)

Responses: Thank you Hunni22 and ElizabethFritz for your feedback! I made some changes based on your suggestions. I linked replacement level to a wiki article that describes it very well so that the reader can reference it if needed. I also sectioned that Replacement Migration paragraph so that it is easier to read. Additionally, I added more information in my criticism section overall. Smilesxo (talk) 05:26, 12 April 2018 (UTC)