User talk:Smith4e4/sandbox/AtmosphericElectricityDraft

I really liked how everything was worded in this article. It was all completely factual and easy to understand. In the Descriptions section, there was a wording, “ and during fine weather away from thunderstorms,” that sounded awkward and confused me, but besides that, I was able to learn about atmospheric electricity rather quickly! Well done! Lavillmm (talk) 21:09, 2 November 2018 (UTC)