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You have done a good job with making a case for Sapna Cheryan's importance in our women's studies class by noting the awards she has won related to her focus on cultural sterotypes. The only opinion I saw was at the end when you noted she has a huge heart. I feel as if your writing is very clear and concise as you provided dates for several of her achievements and you provided many facts about her life. I see you did a good job citing your sources throughout the body of your article. 205.204.29.234 (talk) 01:05, 7 April 2018 (UTC)

Opinionated dicussion
Great work so far on your article, make sure not to put opinion and make it based on facts for your article. The voice on your article should sound blank and just state the facts. Just like shown here: “Although, it’s nice to know Sapna Cheryan profession and achievement, I thought it would also be nice to know a little about her personal life. According, to the “New York Times” Sapna Cheryan meet the man of her dreams Dr.Giridhar. They married on a Saturday in 2008 in Milwaukee Wisconsin. Continuing on The New York Times also states, [2]“Sapna Cheryan will be keeping her name. As of my research Sapna Cheryan doesn’t have kids but, I’ll continue to research making sure the information is the most up to date and reliable as possible.” Anyways I see that you are working on making sure to state the facts, and keep it up. Amend002 (talk) 19:56, 7 April 2018 (UTC)