User talk:Smitlekm/sandbox

Rosey's Peer Review
You have a lot of good information to add to your article, and I like how you separated and clearly defined the history and the mission. The lists of members of the organization that you have are something I definitely want to try to incorporate into mine. There is also a clearly neutral voice. You have a section on priority legislation that I think could be added to with information about how the National Commission on the Status of Women is involved in the legislation. Iresonra (talk) 10:03, 27 November 2018 (UTC)