User talk:Smonsibais/sandbox

Provides excellent insight into how Lister's carbolic acid sterilization procedure was slow to accept due to some of its negative effects towards the patient and how it wasn't without flaw, which isn't fully explored in the article. Same goes for mentioning Lister's writing flaws, diving into the challenges he had to face as a surgeon. I would recommend avoiding unnecessary words such as "heavy," but other than that everything sounds perfect.

Peer review response
Thank you! I included the word "heavy" to indicate that he used the acid more than was practical or needed. I will think about a better way to communicate this without having it sound unnecessary! Smonsibais (talk) 15:16, 28 November 2018 (UTC)