User talk:Sms729/sandbox

https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mapal%C3%A9Sms729 (talk) 19:00, 11 March 2018 (UTC)

peer edit
Hello! This is a good lead and it conveys the importance of the article well. Some sentences are a little difficult to understand because of wording. I suggest you remove where it says “when they are out of the water their moves are said to be represented in the dance” since the same information is repeated towards the end of the paragraph “represent the fish out of the water (men)”. (Estefanym177 (talk) 16:17, 6 April 2018 (UTC)).