User talk:Snickol1/sandbox

The article is coming along well.

Expanding the case studies, or combining into the treatment section might be good approach.

It'd be really great if you could find some images of treatment or storage... and if its treatment, remember it could be illustrative so might not need to be treatment of military uniforms of same time period, could just be of say the felting treatment.

--Daniel Cull (talk) 21:05, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

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This article seems to be coming along really well. Comments:

1. First priority, we would like to see your introduction improved. So first take it above the contents section, then format it in the same way as this one with a similar style introductory sentence. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Conservation_and_restoration_of_photographic_plates

2. In AoD section remove word 'chief'. and re-order the words 'any and address' in second sentence.

3. Throughout... check NPOV... for example; if you have used the word "should", which you do... then it is not in NPOV. You are not writing a "how-to" but a summary of what is done.

4. Maybe put the H&S section under the preventive conservation section... might make it easier to write, and if it ends up becoming bigger can always move it later.

5. If you could expand on any case studies that'd be good.

6. As well as having a see also section, try incorporate this into the text as internal wikipedia links. You do this by enclosing the title of the article between two sets of square brackets, eg. insert title remove spaces

7. You should probably reference some key textile conservation books such as this one... "Chemical Principles of Textile Conservation" by Agnes Timar-Balazsy and Dinah Eastop (you can look up full reference)

8. and this of course should be a key resource https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Conservation_and_restoration_of_textiles

--Daniel Cull (talk) 10:54, 29 April 2019 (UTC)

Look up the case history 6.2 in this book online - http://readinglists.ucl.ac.uk/items/3EF101FB-02E1-A4E8-F30F-5F2E753C7063.html

It is impossible to get a hold of the book, but you should cite from it.

Rose Daly (talk) 13:39, 29 April 2019 (UTC)