User talk:Snmills/sandbox

Peer Review
Your topic is very well written and your writing is very academic. According to Wikipedia training session is may be better to use more plain sentence and casual vocabulary. Student melissa (talk) 17:58, 25 April 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for your feedback! I agree I should use more casual vocabulary, that way the article can appeal to and be understood by a broader range of readers. Snmills (talk) 00:50, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

Your leading paragraph is very well done. Your topic is very clear and is related to class content. I like how your subheadings really connect to your topic and your lead paragraph. You seem to be heading in the right direction by outline everything that you want to talk about and already having your content set up. Keep up the hard work! ANIKAA26 —Preceding undated comment added 04:49, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. Having a good outline really helps while trying to write the article!Snmills (talk) 23:45, 29 April 2018 (UTC)