User talk:Snowycats/Archives//2018/December

Draft: Global Wireless Solutions
Hi,

Thank you for reviewing the draft. I was hoping you would be able to direct me to the fluff that needs to be removed. I would really like to remove all advertising langauge from the page and I would greatly appreciate any suggestions you may have in doing so.

Thanks!

Scwiki3 (talk) 01:00, 30 December 2018 (UTC)
 * - I'd suggest reviewing WP:NPOV and getting rid of anything that doesn't provide needed background knowledge or facts. Snowycats (talk) 01:12, 30 December 2018 (UTC)
 * - Thank you for your advice. I reviewed WP:NPOV and edited the article, attempting to remove all promotional/advertising language and make it entirely encyclopedic. I have resubmitted my edits, so please let me know if there are any further revisions that need to be made. Thanks again, Scwiki3 (talk) 02:21, 30 December 2018 (UTC)
 * - I can see the changes you made. However, I'm going to refrain from reviewing this article and let another reviewer give it another look. Best of luck! Snowycats (talk) 02:40, 30 December 2018 (UTC)

Welcome back!

 * Thank you! How are things? Snowycats (talk) 05:16, 30 December 2018 (UTC)

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