User talk:Snufkinjustin/Jennifer Richeson

Draft Feedback
Hi This is an excellent draft. I made some tiny edits (moving periods and commas to the left of footnotes. I have just a little feedback for you.
 * In the early life section, I would recommend condensing the portion about her schooling and feelings about it. I think there are a few too many details. Preserving the part about her shifting from a predominantly white culture to a more diverse one seems to be the most part of that section since it influenced her career and identity. You can see a great example of an early life section with this article about Aparna Rao, which was recently elevated to Good Article status.
 * For the Op-Ed project, I would recommend red-linking that phrase. I'm not sure if linking to the Op-ed Wikipedia page is the best option since it specifically refers to a distinct entity (the Project) rather than the concept (editorials).

This is such a great draft. You have a strong understanding of Wikipedia's tone! After incorporating changes, feel free to move it live, or reach out to me and I can help. Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:17, 29 March 2021 (UTC)