User talk:Socbluff

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Saqera's Peer Review
There is no lead for this article but it also looks as if Lundyn is creating this article from scratch. Once you continue to piece together the framework, a lead would be very beneficial! You pulled a lot of good information from your source. There were certain words that could be taken out, for example, "the late Liberty Hyde...". By taking out the word late you could add a link to his name and users would be able to learn more about his life and death that way. Parts of the article sounded more like a summary rather than an encyclopedia. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Peaceofmind18.19 (talk • contribs) 16:37, 9 October 2018 (UTC)