User talk:SocyProf/sandbox

Hey there!

Sorry it took a little longer to get to this–turns out we didn't have wifi on the train. I think your sandbox page looks great! I just have a few minor suggestions. In paragraph 1, you might consider including a link to the Wikipedia page on public accommodations (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Public_accommodations).

I made a couple of minor copy edits (added a semicolon, changed "fist" to "first"), but otherwise this all looks really good to me. The writing is clear, concise, and informative without bringing in any POV issues that I see.

Citation 22 in the references list looks like it needs an update. Other than those really minor things, you've done a great job expanding on the material in the original article to add useful details and context, and I think this looks like it's good to go!

BaileyPoland (talk) 13:49, 26 July 2018 (UTC)