User talk:SofiaMarshmallow

Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your contributions. One of the core policies of Wikipedia is that articles should always be written from a neutral point of view. A contribution you made to Awem appears to carry a non-neutral point of view, and your edit may have been changed or reverted to correct the problem. Please remember to observe this important core policy. Thank you. Marasmusine (talk) 14:44, 6 August 2010 (UTC)

Sofia, I have had to edit your contribution to Awem for neutral point of view again. You cited a review, which is fine, but you only presented the reviewer's positive comments and quoted a snappy sound-bite. Marasmusine (talk) 11:29, 12 August 2010 (UTC)

Please stop. If you continue to violate Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy, you may be blocked from editing Wikipedia. Again, you were cherry-picking positive comments, even citing press releases ("Cradle Of Persia offers impeccable visuals and a catching background story"). Marasmusine (talk) 10:49, 19 August 2010 (UTC)

Hi Sofia, I'll try to make this clear. Let's look at your edits. You did include some usable citations, but there were so many other stylistic problems in addition to the WP:NPOV issues. I reasoned it would be easier to revert and start again.
 * 6th August is not neutral: it's written like an advert and although you cited a review you chose to only quote positive comments.
 * 12th August - again you cherry-pick the positive comments, and quote a snappy sound-bite of no encyclopedic value.
 * 19th August - Cradle of Persia: again, only positive comments, this time not even from a review - you cite a press release. There's also some external link creep, with more unnecessary links to various Awem sites.
 * 19th August - Golden Trails: Another citation to a press release, with another sound-bite quote.

Forgive me for asking, but do you do PR work for Awem? Your username is associated elsewhere with promotional work etc. Marasmusine (talk) 13:27, 19 August 2010 (UTC)

Re: "Can't say that your information is neutral, it's rather negative, as you chose the most negative sentece in the review. So, I wish you to be more neutral!". I summarized both the positive and negative comments made by the reviewer (in fact this was her only negative comment). This is balanced. If you can't grasp this basic concept then I'm not sure how else to advise you. Marasmusine (talk) 14:06, 19 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Hi, yes, I plan to go through your citations and re-add the material as I vet them. We can't still accept the material based on press releases though. Marasmusine (talk) 14:32, 19 August 2010 (UTC)

Hi Sofia... please can you stop adding promotional text to Awem? (In this instance I have edited out the phrase "..full of mysterious letters and unexpected twists of events. The game features classic gameplay topped with simple and welcoming new twists.") I'm making this your last warning. Marasmusine (talk) 13:08, 26 October 2010 (UTC)