User talk:Sofialr3931/

Peer Review
Dear, Sofialr3931

This is a very interesting topic. I am excited to see where you choose to expand on the subject because the article is so short right now. There is a lot of potentials to add substance.

Things I like- The introduction presents a number of topics that can be expanded on such as the history of the mummy, the discovery, the research that has been conducted. All things that you eluded to on your sandbox page. I also like how well-cited the article is. Every claim had its relevant source.

Things that could be improved- I think the article is in large part incomplete. I like your idea to add a "Discovery" and "Scientific Investigation". I think that the article could also benefit from a section regarding the history of the practice of sacrifice in the specific culture because that's how these remains were created.