User talk:Sofie99/Viral pneumonia

-I would say the biggest thing that I would suggest changing is maybe a clearer idea of what pneumonia is. I see that it is viral, but I think for someone who heard of viral pneumonia and is looking on this page for more information would know that they have a virus but could use more of an explanation of what pneumonia is. While this isn't precisely epidemiology, but in terms of epi, I would say more clear understanding of what constitutes pneumonia could be helpful. So, to sum that up, maybe more clarification of what pneumonia is in terms of diagnosis. -My second suggestion would be in your word choice before you list the comorbidities in the Epi section would be to use a different word than "like", however that's being kind of picky. -The overall epi section I would suggest going from large factors to large: worldwide number, differences in countries, age, pregnancy, then comorbidities.

Otherwise, awesome stuff! Emilia.boleyn (talk) 21:38, 14 November 2020 (UTC)Emilia.boleyn