User talk:Sohn.philip/sandbox

Hi Phillip, Reading this page gave me a good idea of the topic, and helped me understand the main points which is good. I think what would be helpful is if you could include a scheme in the mechanism section, so one could better visualize what your describing. Also, perhaps you could find a structure for NMerA, I think that would be nice if you could include that too. In terms of adding images, I think it may be good to include a picture for mercury(II) reductase. Finally, I would try and elaborate on the application section. Anavimadumim15 (talk) 23:43, 27 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello Phillip,

Your article felt like a good read (in terms of flow), and I found the application interesting. Though for clarity, I'm wondering if some images could be introduced for the mechanism and/ the Regulation pathways. For example, with the mechanism, if some images exist that present the reactions in the context of the active site geometry, it would supplement your explanation greatly. That being said, I do not know which sorts of images/schematics are, or are not published in this field.

On more annoying notes, by "embedded FAD", does this mean membrane-bound FAD? If this is the case,it may be worth it to consider rewording it to eliminate a bit of ambiguity. Moreover, I'm not sure if this is me nitpicking, but usually the terms "get" or "getting" is slang and typically is left out of any sort of formal writing. Perhaps check if that is acceptable language in other articles?.

Good luck!

Harris.qureshi (talk) 10:00, 2 March 2015 (UTC)