User talk:Sombra94/sandbox

Biography :


 * "the at the lycée Saint-Louis" : you forgot the subject
 * "he obtained an engineering degree of Télécom SudParis" : I don't think the correct preposition here is "of", maybe "at" or "from" ?
 * "They are from Chinese and Vietnamese origins by their father, Chinese and Belgian by their mother." : I would rather say "they have Chinese and Vietnamese origins ..."
 * "Initially, only Kevin, the elder brother, made sketches on Youtube" : I'm not sure about the use of "make" here. I'd have used "do".

Flrncgx (talk) 21:14, 7 May 2018 (UTC)