User talk:SonOfTheHoundOfTheSea/First Nations nutrition experiments

Peer Review from Aditya Gautham to Leslie McNamara.

Hi Leslie, so it seems like you are going to start off the article by talking about the first nutritional study of the First Nations and how that lead to a more extensive study and you have a lot of facts on one of the studies that proceeds after it. I like how you already have some sources, but there seem to be some statements that aren't cited, like that first 1942 experiment so that may be something to keep in mind. It also looks like you're going to be talking about how they did experiments in schools as well. One thing I'm curious about is how/if you are going to keep a neutral tone since these experiments are pretty unethical but also you have to be objective in a Wiki article. But overall, it's a promising start!