User talk:Son of the River

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Etiquette and grammar
Please review Etiquette, as your comment at my talk page is indeed highly inappropriate (see No personal attacks). Also, please review Manual of Style. Make sure the content of your edit is well-written and coherent, and try not to go over the same points repeatedly and fill the article with short proses that only consist of a sentence or two. I also noticed that you tend to paste large chunks of quotes to a citation. If you already cited the page number, please do not add quotes to it; that is highly unnecessary and prolongs the article. Regards.--Balthazarduju (talk) 00:14, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

your edit summaries consisted of attacks on the content I added. And you seemed to be exclusively stalking my edits, not anyone else or just fixing things in general, waiting for the next edit I made. The same points are gone over to use all the sources available. I don't leave sources floating around the article with no conent attached to them.Son of the River (talk) 19:43, 21 October 2011 (UTC)