User talk:Sonam jindal/Sonam jindal/sandbox

Peer Review I'm surprised an article on the history of medical education didn't already exist!

-Since you are starting a completely new article, it would benefit from an introduction section that outlines the main points of the articles, including suggestions for future additions.

-There are two periods around the third citation

-You can probably link William Harvey's article

-You talk about a lot of "various" systems and issues of unification in the second paragraph, I'm interested to learn about them specifically

-Delete "as" in the fourth sentence of the third paragraph

You have the challenge of starting from scratch. It's a great comprehensive look but it can use some more specifics for the Renaissance period of medical education.

David Zhao