User talk:Sooner016/World stratification

This article seems to read like an essay rather than an encyclopedia article. Among other things it needs an introduction. DJ Clayworth (talk) 17:03, 8 April 2008 (UTC)

It reads like an essay because I wrote it for a class. Give it a couple days to let my teacher grade it and then we can start making changes, if that is ok. Hopefully you'll understand that I spent a lot of time on it and the assignment is a very important part of my grade. So if we can let it sit for a couple days I would appreciate it. I will work on an introduction.

Sooner016 (talk) 17:11, 8 April 2008 (UTC)sooner016


 * I'm not quite clear about this. Are you saying that your teacher is going to grade the article as it stands on Wikipedia? If not then you can just send your teacher a copy and let her grade that. You do understand that anyone is free to edit any article on Wikipedia, so your article may not last long in the form you wrote it. DJ Clayworth (talk) 17:51, 8 April 2008 (UTC)