User talk:Sophia8004/sandbox

You have a solid summary so far! You can improve it by linking related Wikipedia articles on keywords like "plasticity" or "nervous system" or "motor neurons." You can expand on your writing further by connecting these keywords to your topic. Like how does neuroplasticity to restorative neurology? What specific roles do motor neurons play in restorative neurology? You can also talk about different approaches to treat impaired nervous systems because I'm sure there had been a lot of technological and medical improvements on rehabilitation, and also a lot of scholarly articles on the topic. In addition to that, you used a lot of technical terms like "residual control," and it would be easier to follow if you define it briefly. You can probably also add information on the process. Like how do these neurological impairments occur? What are the effects of these impairments? How do patients usually rehabilitate? And is it possible to completely recover and obtain full functionality? If you really want to dig deeper, you can research more about the anatomy behind your topic. I have VERY basic knowledge on psychology from one confusing quarter of psychology (hahaha), and even though it was confusing, it was really interesting, and there's a lot of potential to expand on it for this Wikipedia article. Other than that, I think what you have so far is great! The language is very formal and professional. You just need to proofread a little bit to make sure that the grammar and syntax are perfect. Good luck!Roginegomez (talk) 02:14, 15 February 2018 (UTC)