User talk:Sophia shapiro

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Hello, Sophia shapiro, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Who Shall Die
Hello, I have had a look at your new article. The topic is very interesting and the article is well written. However, I have some comments and suggestions for improvement: Again, thank you for the new article. If you have any questions, my talk page is always available. Happy editing! Happy Squirrel (talk) 16:21, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Please use section and subsection headers. I have done a few so you can see. This makes it clearer for the viewer and gives you an automatic table of contents.
 * There is no "cite play" template. You can use "cite book" instead. Since a play is quite a long document, it is a good idea to fill in the "page" field so other people can find the information.
 * Please give wikilinks to other articles. You can do this either by writing the title of the article in double square brackets (ex: Who Shall Die gives Who Shall Die) or by piping your link (ex: this play gives this play).
 * Great improvment! Keep it up. Happy Squirrel (talk) 16:49, 19 April 2016 (UTC)